Are the friends you have now good friends or bad influence? How could you tell if your friends are worthy to keep? Have you ever asked yourself these questions about your friends? Not realizing the effect friends may have on us is harmful because we do not know where they are leading us to. It can also be irresponsible to ourselves and to the people who love us when we end up on a path that we did not plan on taking. So it is very important to know whether our friends are good friends or bad influence.
Above is the introduction to my CP paper. I hope it can make sense. I don’t like the revised title though, because it is kind of the same with my opening sentence. So maybe I will end up changing my title again. My old title was “When people are choosing their friends,” but the feedbacks were not good and many people thought it was too long and kind of boring. I do not know how to make this not boring because, I mean, this is a boring topic. Anyway, I am not expecting my paper to be perfect or fantastic.
And by the way, I went to the writing center this morning and I absolutely loved it! It was an hour-long appointment, but because my draft was pathetic, we did not have enough time to go through a whole lot. However, now, I think I know how to make my paper better. Just be more specific!
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